Friday 8 October 2010

The film review for our film- 1st draft

2 comments:

  1. 1) no caption on image
    2) no page number
    3) no cast or crew deatils
    4) more info needed in verdict box
    5) your text wrapped insert isn't in the correct position or an appropriate size
    6) no mention of magazine name

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  2. No page numbers
    No captions
    No magazine title

    Image isint very neccasary, could of used a better image for the review.
    Genres not clear
    No cast or crew details
    verdict could be more in the middle
    Overall the layout isnt that bad.

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